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The best things in life can not be seen,
That's when we close our eyes,
When we cry,
Kiss,
And dream.

I close my eyes
When I kiss.
But it doesn't help me,
I still see you,
Our kiss.

I close my eyes
When I cry.
So I can see you,
Your love,
Your care.

I close my eyes
When I dream.
So I can see my life,
How I want it,
With you.
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... wrote this a long time ago but I thought I threw it away... apparently not...

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OK, it might take a while but I think I want to "do a piece" based on this, with your permission, of course. I'm just having trouble figuring out what to draw, you wrote it, what where you picturing?

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you had a dream but this ain't it...
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of course you can draw it!!! that would be awesome! idk, this was one of the first poems I've written, but reading it now, I see a kind of simple sad picture, it's hard to explain, but I'm sure whatever you come up with will be much better. ^_^

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People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you can appriciate them when they're right, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.
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mmkay, I'll see what I can do...

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you had a dream but this ain't it...
:iconrandomcutie:
cool, thanks agian.

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People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you can appriciate them when they're right, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.
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its really whimsical...lovely
:iconrandomcutie:
whimsical... i like that word... ^_^ thanks

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People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you can appriciate them when they're right, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.
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oo! One I haven't read... good job, it is very good

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Love all... Trust few... Do wrong to no one
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yeah, I think I'm gonna let you read most of my poetry on here now. thank you ^_^

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People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you can appriciate them when they're right, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.

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